[GNUz] SFD paid advert

[Rik Tindall]

Thanks Warren,

some helpful points.

Warren Stuart wrote:
> I am definetly no expert 
me neither
> but here are a few things you could possibly change:
>
> Remove the first two headings as the advert will still work without
> them in my opinion
>
> "International festival of Free and Open Source Software
> Secure Computing"
Hmm.. these describe the event, and give it a theme presumably 
attractive to consumers and teachers etc. I'm not convinced the 
uninformed will understand us without these (?)
>
> The date at the top should be in  the standard NZ format to match the
> dates later on "September 16th" to "16 September"
Done. But graphic still ok?
>
> and I am pretty sure the comma at "September, 2006" does not need to 
> be there. 
Done.
>
> Change "install help" to "installation help"
Done.
>
> Expand "movie" to "presentation movie" or something like that, to
> describe what the movie is about.
"DVD screening" better?
>
> change "free CDs" to "free software CDs" or "free software"
good point too.

Near complete?

cheers

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Rik